Hey, just critiquing your collage. I am not to familiar with this image so it is hard for me to give you feedback. I read your paper and I agree with your interpretation of this piece that it has to do with hunting and the killing of innocent animals.
I understand where you are coming from with your collage, but i feel like you should play around with images from nature and the killing of innocent animals. It would be more closely related to Oppenheim's image. Also, a little confused why you put Saturn in your collage.
Overall I think you have a great start and I am sure this piece will come out great once it is done.
Hey, I really like the background to your collage. I really like the bird. I looks like your background in of New York back when it had twin tours so the bird reminds me of extinct. I know that bald eagles are going extinct and pretty soon they will be just like the twin tours if we don't fix the problem.
I don't understand how the planet fits in. I would put something else that no longer exists or is going extinct in the picture.
I have no idea if I'm on the right track but this is what I got out of your picture.
I appreciate the feedback on my collage, but truth be told I had missed a few days because of a head injury back when we were working on these and I was not aware that our collages had to somehow represent the image that we were told to critique. Disregard this collage.
Hey, just critiquing your collage. I am not to familiar with this image so it is hard for me to give you feedback. I read your paper and I agree with your interpretation of this piece that it has to do with hunting and the killing of innocent animals.
ReplyDeleteI understand where you are coming from with your collage, but i feel like you should play around with images from nature and the killing of innocent animals. It would be more closely related to Oppenheim's image. Also, a little confused why you put Saturn in your collage.
Overall I think you have a great start and I am sure this piece will come out great once it is done.
Hey, I really like the background to your collage. I really like the bird. I looks like your background in of New York back when it had twin tours so the bird reminds me of extinct. I know that bald eagles are going extinct and pretty soon they will be just like the twin tours if we don't fix the problem.
ReplyDeleteI don't understand how the planet fits in. I would put something else that no longer exists or is going extinct in the picture.
I have no idea if I'm on the right track but this is what I got out of your picture.
I appreciate the feedback on my collage, but truth be told I had missed a few days because of a head injury back when we were working on these and I was not aware that our collages had to somehow represent the image that we were told to critique. Disregard this collage.
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